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The Sales Page Copy Cure
-It's like a dose of vitamins for your copy!
 

If you're a Health & Wellness Coach or Service Provider

with a live digital sales page, that's not performing as well as you had hoped you don't have to settle for less.

The success of your page is determined by many factors, like what you sell, whom you sell it to, and how you present it.

With so many moving parts leading to and from your sales page, from social posts to landing pages, lead magnets, emails, and all points in between, you've carefully mapped out the journey that will lead your potential customer from hello to thank you and beyond;

BUT... when it comes to copy

It's very common for you to be too close to the project to identify where things may be less than optimal, let alone know how it can be improved. But, one thing is for certain its not producing the sales you want...

That's where the copy cure can help!

Did you know that the health industry average conversion rate is 2.9%?

source: unbounce.com

Numbers don't lie. If your conversion rate has room to improve, consider how a sales page copy review can help you:

  • Clarify your sales page content by identifying and cleaning up murky messages that kill conversions.

  • Get your target prospects attention by using the language they will understand.

  • Motivate your reader to action by perfecting your CTA's, headlines, subheads, crossheads and body copy.

  • Erase the friction causing stressors that keep your prospect from buying. 

Debbie is a gem. Her laid-back yet professional demeanor was relaxing for me. I didn't feel like I had to work at this business relationship; it just flowed naturally and left me feeling confident in her abilities. 

-Susie De Giusti- TGIF-Towards Gainful Infinite Freedom Inc.

Ready For Some Expert Eyes on Your Copy?
 

How It Works:

 

 

 

You'll complete a google form questionnaire so I can
learn all about what you do, whom you do it for, your funnel, and which sales copy you want to be reviewed for optimization.Then we'll meet for a 20-30min Zoom chat to tie up any loose ends.

 

Then I’ll begin the copy review process focusing on key conversion areas and identifying missed opportunities that could be robbing you of the  sales you want like:

 

 Headlines/Sub-Headlines

 Calls to Action

 Pain points, features, key benefits

 Trust & Authority

 Overall clarity and flow of your copy

 UX and Page Design advice (where applicable)

 

 

With these findings as my guide, I’ll record a video screen-cast review of your page so we can walk through it ‘together’—at your convenience

Your final package will be delivered to you by email and will include a link to your video and any supporting documents if referenced in your video review so that you can begin to implement changes right away.

 



If questions arise, email me, and I’ll answer within 1 business day.

The Sales Page Copy Cure
Is Right For You If...

  • It's been over a year since you've set up your sales page, and you haven't had time to look back!

  • You have analytics that show deficiencies but don't know how to fix them.

  • You think your conversion rate could be better.

  • You wrote your own copy as best you could- but you're in a better position for professional help now.

  • You used AI to write your copy through programs like Convert-kit, Lead Pages, Click Funnels or (insert your program name here)

I believe that copy that converts is mined through research, assembled with wisdom, and executed through strategy; anything less is mere words on a page, and you've worked too hard for that!- Debbie

Ready to Refine Your Sales Page?

Debbie Diosi  The Writery Owner Copywriter

 

 

 

As your copywriter friend, I want you to know that I have your best interest at heart; I consider your success a win for me!

When you choose to work with me, you get over a decade of combined experience in written communication that connects and motivates, including emails and course content.

 

For over two years, I've been helping my clients with their website copy, email copy, sales pages, and brochures, and I am trained and certified in sales enablement copy with The American Writers and Artists Institute.

But most importantly, when you work with me, you get a team member who is interested in you, your service, and your audience, and your success!

Hello!

I was surprised at how easy the process was, if you're thinking about working with Debbie, just do it, you won't regret it.

-Dr. Andrea E. Calgary, AB

Your Path to Better Sales Copy Awaits

How Much Does It Cost?

Price is determined on the size and complexity of your existing sales page and your preparedness to work with me. 

A typical sales page review starts at $199 for a short form sales page up to 1500 words and $350 for a longer page up to 5000 words.

This includes everything we’ve covered so far,

 

  • Get to know you brief- You'll complete a google form questionnaire where you'll have the opportunity to let me know more about your business, audience and what you would like help with. Then, we'll follow up with a 30min Zoom meeting to ensure all questions are answered.

  • A thorough review of your sales page copy

  • Inbox delivery of your results in a tidy .pdf package with links to your video screencast review and supporting documentation—if referenced in the video— so you can make changes at your convenience

  • Access to me for follow-up support as needed- you're not alone in the process.

Incredible Value! 

What if I want YOU to rewrite something for me?

Rewrites are not included in this audit offer, but as your copywriter friend, I’m happy to help. Just let me know, and we’ll discuss what you need, and I’ll action a separate proposal/agreement to accommodate your needs.

How Long Does It Take?

Depending on the size and complexity of your sales page the process can take anywhere from 2-7business days from the initial meeting to your inbox delivery.

Do You Have Questions?

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